Entry #116

Golds of Altir: The Dead Prince - Issue #1

2017-05-07 00:26:07 by MavisRooder

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Hey guys. Just saying that the first issue of my new comic strip is finished. This is totally my own thing - and by that I mean that I finally made something I haven't been paid or asked for, unlike the most of the stuff on www.mydirtydrawings.com. ...Well not exactly. I lied... TBH one of my patrons at https://www.patreon.com/mavis 
asked me to draw bug bear having sex with beautiful red headed barbarian girl . This :
http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/mavisrooder/bugbear-attack - and shortly after I received the request I have figured out that I already have a red haired character of my own. I created her firstly at 2013 but can't find the pinup of here anywhere around. Anyways. I just created an entire comic strip with her : Kyana - having sex with the bugbear. And it had to be in 5 pages in total - and to make the comic for less than a month.
Instead I made the comic longer, by adding more pages and changed the format of the pages. I used the map I made back in 2013 and started my story in Dourga. Check the map if you want - and started it from there.
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The bugbear is original character speciment from dungeons and dragons, but I liked how he looks and  included him into the story. However I've changed the name "bugbear" and named them "orgras" - and probably I will not use these characters in the next issues  or ever again. Instead I might concentrate on creating my own monsters and creatures. 

Anyway - instead of me to draw a fast 5 page comic - I started to write and make concept about religious beliefs based on the ancient religions known to the human kind: Greek and Roman gods. I was reading the scandinavian mythology and the gods of Egypt. Let's say I went a little bit deeper into that matter just to write 2 lines about non existing gods in my porn comic .... Yes, it's porn comic, but I didn't wanted just to make it pull in pull out - orgasm - the end. The sexual part is not the leading.  It has to have a story - and the sex - is just by the way, but I believe it's good enough as a presense to it.

Whats the story about ? Kyana - the read haired girl - is telling the false story about the dead of a prince to his father - the king. The comic went about 8 pages in total with the size you will see on the samples I'm showing on my site here:
http://www.mydirtydrawings.com/comic/golds-of-altir-the-dead-prince/
What I'm planning to do in there - except for the obvious sex stuff ? 
I'm planning to add violence and gore - for battle scenes. I want this to be a barbaric world with warriors and wenches, monsters and wizards. Magic and steel. And here comes the mythology I made up.
I've added 9 more pages with "confusing" explanations about the myths and species on Altir - seen on the comic.
Orgrans /bugbear/ are nothing but mercenaries and some specific stuff about the Dourgans.
With all written the people should get the idea that Demigods are going to be the bad guys in my stories.
And that's all about the world of Altir.

Some more time took in addition, because I asked a friend to help me with the edits. English is not my mother's tongue and grammar is not my strong side, so Paladox - was kind to do a proof of reading.

Now, this comic I won't be showing it for free on my site as the other stuff I do.
I already charged the patrons for it - since I made the settings here : https://www.patreon.com/mydirtydrawings - charge for a finished comic strip - not by monthly pledge.

If you pledge here, but you want the first issue - you will need to pledge $5 or above on my other patreon: 
https://www.patreon.com/mavis  - so you can get it at the beginning of the next month. I know it sucks and it's a bit confusing. But the reasons are as follows:

1. https://www.patreon.com/mavis - the patrons are getting charged  automatically at the beginning of the next month
2. https://www.patreon.com/mydirtydrawings - the patrons are getting charged by me, when I'm ready with the comic

Let's say if I need 3 months to make every comic strip: that's really a long time to wait and incredibly slow - keep in mind that I'm working on my other patreon as well and I work on commissions too, in order to earn money and to provide for mine. 

If one guy pledges on my first account he will get the issue faster- within a month , but he won't be supporter of the comic strip itself. About this thing I will write in another post.

So if you pledge here $1 or $5 : https://www.patreon.com/mydirtydrawings - you will get the Upcoming comic strip - the one I'm currently working. What about the previous one or the one you haven't read but you want to get ?
To get the old issue, you will have to pledge $5 or $10 on my other patreon: https://www.patreon.com/mavis
and I will give it to you once the month is over and you are charged successfully by the patreon's system.
How all this mess can be fixed ?
Simple: if I get enough people to pledge and support me on this patreon : https://www.patreon.com/mydirtydrawings.
I already stated my goal in there - help me to reach it and I will be able to concentrate mostly on the comic and all that stuff with me working on several places like octopus will be over - I will be working on the comic strip mostly.
 

 


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